My First Novel

This was my first and only attempt at writing a song. The thing I am the most proud of is the pentameter, what do you think? I have music to go along with it (thanks to ACID, a very easy to use music program), but I don't know how to put it on here, and besides, I can't sing anyway! And yes, the name of the song is My First Novel, there's a long story behind that, but that's for another time.


There was a time
When I felt fine
There was a night
When things went right

I don't know
When things went wrong
I just hope
It wont last long

Who's this bitch
With me tonight
Did she make
Me feel alright

What am I
Supposed to do
Who am I
And who are you

I'm telling them
They're telling me
I'm feeling things
That I don't feel

I don't know
How I'll survive
I just hope
I'll keep my mind

All this time
I still can't see
All this pain
Was meant for me

What am I
Supposed to do
Who am I
And who are you